Saturday, November 17, 2012

Life Still Goes On ...(Life Goes On - Part II)...!!!

After a long span of time,
Finally, u moved on completely ...

They says time is the greatest heal ,
your innocent heart, so much agree...



U have life n zeal
again u feel , all is well

Whatever happened ,
was happened for the good, better n best,
                                      forget all d rest
no regret , not sad n disagree
your heart is finally happy n agree...



U feel , Destiny is nice


But

---------------------------------------------xxxxx-----------------------------


U have not paid the full price ...

The desnity is a Chameleon

at the moment when u r happy with ur destiny
it decide to show u the true color
the color f shadow , the color f night
the color f dark , the color f fright ...

Suddenly
the color changes to grey,
a moment ago which was red

n again

u betrayed, u hated
u fade, u sad

u feel bad , u yell
u lost all the zeal 

u pale , u dull
u small , u null

Again the wheel of time rolls
again u got so many persons
this time u don't believe in destiny
u don't dare to share,
u don't care to be fair...


U feel alone like hell,
like for no reason u r in jail

life teases u again with its thousand ways  ...

Now u couldn't move on
but Life goes on,

Life Still Goes On ...Goes On!!!

6 comments:

  1. finally ,...apni daastaaan....shabdo mai byaaan ho hi gyiiiiii :) gud1 ladke.....

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. haha... ye to har ashiq ki daastan hai , bas shabd mere hain kshitij bhai ...:P

      Delete
  2. Hi

    Emotions are well put and described.

    Needs makeover in terms of English ;)

    ReplyDelete
  3. thanks nikita for ur honest n beautiful feedback , i vl try to improve in terms of english ..

    ReplyDelete
  4. In d middle,somewhat not that attractive but i liked last 10 lines most..its really very true..nice efforts..

    ReplyDelete